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Post by salukideeluxe on Jul 30, 2007 16:40:04 GMT -5
Dubbed: Saluki Deeluxe Stable Name: Deeluxe Chromosomes: Mare Height: 16.2 hh Weight: Average Bloodline: Quarter horse x Thoroughbred Milestone: 4 years Build: slim x bulky x slightly petite Manual: flirty x calm x seductive x quick wit Discpilines: Racing, English/Western Pleasure, Jumping, Showing Vices: Doesn't get along with most mares, cribs when she doesn't get much attention or excercise. Website: www.freewebs.com/salukideeluxe/If interested in purchasing such a beautiful and athletic mare, please whisper Saluki Deeluxe or reply to this board. Price Requested-$10,000 You will not be disappointed ;3. Also if you wanted to see a pic of the gorgeous mare, please check out her website for exclusive pics. |
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Post by Sasha Adrik on Jul 30, 2007 20:53:39 GMT -5
I have a few questions/comments/nit picks with your site information and the like.
First off let's start with the picks from another person I was talking to about it since I'll get on a roll when I start from here. How the hell can you be slim and bulky AND petite? That's just contradicting everything there.
Also, contradictions on your 'attitude' as well as it were. Also, horses do not seduce nor are they witty. Now that that part's out of the way let's move on to the disciplines.
Okay, in quarter horse and thoroughbred races I do believe the horses have to be registered as pure when it comes to that. A half-breed would NOT be allowed to race in either one of the disciplines.
Also, racers don't tend to do any other events while they're racing, especially intense ones where they could get hurt such as cross country for that matter. Pick a damn style of riding and stay there, don't go between western and english, seriously.
And one more thing, 'showing' doesn't say shit to anyoine. What KIND of showing? Showing is too general a freaking term to use in that sense to describe what your horse does.
That's my rant for the night, however I don't normally rip newbies apart but the way you describe your character it makes you sound really... pretentious by calling your character athletic and gorgeous. Just talk about the build in general terms instead of making it sound like she's the perfect horse and the like. I'd be glad to offer help if you want it, I'm usually not as ranty as this.
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quinn
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Post by quinn on Jul 31, 2007 15:41:39 GMT -5
The first part is not necessarily true. Most of the quarter horses racing currently have thoroughbred not too far back in their lines. It's more likely to find an appendix QH on the track than a regular, purebred QH. However, you won't be able to race on any track in furcadia - they only accept purebreds.
the only part about the second statement I disagree with is the don't-go-between-western-and-english. Lots of horses can do western and english. But if you're going to have your horse a racehorse, yes, please do not male them compete in anything else - it's way too taxing and the risk of injury is far higher, especially when that other discipline is cross country. Those two sports alone are the most hazardous horse disciplines I have seen in my life, not including the suicide race.
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Post by Sasha Adrik on Jul 31, 2007 18:12:30 GMT -5
The first part is not necessarily true. Most of the quarter horses racing currently have thoroughbred not too far back in their lines. It's more likely to find an appendix QH on the track than a regular, purebred QH. However, you won't be able to race on any track in furcadia - they only accept purebreds. the only part about the second statement I disagree with is the don't-go-between-western-and-english. Lots of horses can do western and english. But if you're going to have your horse a racehorse, yes, please do not male them compete in anything else - it's way too taxing and the risk of injury is far higher, especially when that other discipline is cross country. Those two sports alone are the most hazardous horse disciplines I have seen in my life, not including the suicide race. Ah, thanks for clearing that one up, I wasn't too terribly sure about the quarter horse racing one. And I have little else to add to this right now so I'm just going to leave it at that. |
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Post by Haleigh Sharphowl on Jul 31, 2007 20:20:53 GMT -5
Many horses do english and western but few can seriously compete at both. You are not going to find a champion reiner doing grand prix 3-day eventing, period.
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